初中英语作文万能黄金模板！（收藏）(7)

All the best,
Mary
详解
1. 题干解读：
该题目属于书信作文。题目要求是请你以Mary的身份，根据提示背景，给你的笔友John写一封60词左右的信，向他介绍一下奥运小明星全红婵，并表达你对她的祝愿。
2. 写法指导：
本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称；写作中，要根据提示要点介绍全红婵的个人信息、家庭信息，最后表达你对全红婵的祝愿。文章要紧扣题目要点，千万不要遗漏要点，内容可适发挥，但要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句要符合英语的表达习惯，不要出现语法错误。
02
请以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”为题，从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面介绍一下你身边的一个人在这几年的变化。
要求：
1. 至少写出三个变化，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。
He/She Has Changed a Lot
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He Has Changed a Lot
My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.
Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.
Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.