2019年全国统一考试浙江卷英语 独家逐题解析(41)

你儿子可能不是队里最好的篮球运动员。Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.第二句：但是假如他每天在外打球很努力，不管他的团队输还是赢，都应该表扬他的努力。But if he"s out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.第三句：表扬努力的过程而不是结果也意味着当他们在努力地清扫庭院、烧饭菜完成读书笔记的时候你都是认可你的孩子的。Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report.第四句：
不管是什么，表扬应该基于个案，与孩子投入的努力相称。But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的) to the amount of effort your child hasput into It.第一第二第三句的举例都为了表达我们要表扬孩子努力的过程而不是结果。第四句提出父母要怎样的表扬。自己的话表达：Parents are expected to praise kids on a reasonable basis in accordance with kids" amount of effort.Praise is supposed to be in line with actual cases and proportional efforts your child has made.
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刘凯老师：Parents believe praising can help boost children"s confidence while too much praise may result in opposite effects. However, inadequate praise can discourage them , and their endeavor is meaningless. According to experts, it is the quality of praise rather than quantity that matters, which shows parents" sincerity and concentration on process instead of focusing on the outcome. In fact, praise is supposed to be in line with actual cases and proportional efforts the children have made. ( 76 words)